Raynes, I don't know what you want to accomplish with TryClojure, but I see three obvious use cases:
1 - an online REPL for Clojure programmers;
2 - a quick teaser for people getting into Clojure;
3 - a basic Clojure tutorial.
1 doesn't seem either very useful or particularly easy to do (we'd need multi-line input at least). 2 and 3 can kinda coexist, and Try Clojure seems to want to address both - but I think that 3 is a lot of work. I believe that 2 is both the most realistic and useful target. It's also the use case I personally care for, because it brings people to Clojure, and I'm just starting to learn Clojure myself, so I'm all about evangelizing. 😃
So, if you agree we should focus on 2, then maybe we can review what we have and put in some constraints. I imagine the person coming to the site as an OOP programmer exploring something different - the teaser should captivate her and convince her that Clojure is exceptionally cool and useful.
This teaser should be fun, very fast (like, 5 to 15 minutes), and it should show the most mind-blowing features of Clojure, to pique people's curiosity. It's not a problem if the teaser doesn't explain the features in enough detail for the user to understand everything, as long as they make him eager to learn more.
For example, a tutorial-like description of Clojure's types is probably not very compelling for a teaser. On the other hand, showing macros and hinting at their power (cool), or showing people how easily they can use existing Java libraries (useful) - that would work. This means dropping a few pages from the current Try Clojure and introducing a few new ones, and I'm not sure I'd have time to do this myself - but it can be a good guideline for future contributors.
Sorry, this was really long. And BTW, the existing Try Clojure is great already, so I'll be happy even if you have a different vision for this thing.