Copy for the splash page about opendesignkit HOT 9 CLOSED

I took a stab at drafting the copy - I would love feedback and editing from @pamela-drouin

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I edited the copy @iamjessklein directed me to.

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"help design project collaborators” is really unclear to me because it sounds like you are going to get help designing the project collaborators, rather than helping “design project” collaborators, which I believe is the intended meaning

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Thanks @ajpiano - @labond and I worked on the copy and simplified it a ton. Now it says:

h1 Open Design Kit
p A living toolkit for designing with remote collaborators.
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footer [bocoup logo] The Bocoup Design team maintains Open Design Kit as an open source tool. It is useful for anyone who is designing with people who are not co-located. The Kit includes activities from ideation to implementation and is meant to evolve with use. To share your feedback or add an activity, open an issue or pull request on our Github repository.

If everyone is good with this, I'd love to close this issue and have @isaacdurazo incorporate it into #40

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Looks great to me. Just want to double-check that the capitalization is
correct here: Bocoup Design team - do we keep team uncapitalized?

On Wed, Jun 15, 2016 at 7:16 AM, iamjessklein [email protected]
wrote:

Thanks @ajpiano https://github.com/ajpiano - @labond
https://github.com/labond and I worked on the copy and simplified it a
ton. Now it says:

h1 Open Design Kit
p Open Design Kit is a living toolkit for designing with remote
collaborators.
button View on Github
footer [bocoup logo] The Bocoup Design team maintains Open Design Kit as
an open source tool. It is useful for anyone who is designing with people
who are not co-located. The Kit includes activities from ideation to
implementation and is meant to evolve with use. To share your feedback or add
an activity
https://github.com/bocoup/opendesignkit/wiki/Method-Guide-Template,
open an issue or pull request on our Github repository.

If everyone is good with this, I'd love to close this issue and have
@isaacdurazo https://github.com/isaacdurazo incorporate it into #40
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I cross referenced bocoup.com and found that the datavis team is listed as "Bocoup's Data Visualization team" - so I'll make our copy match that. I'll copy the copy hehe.

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@ajpiano - can we close this issue?

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Thanks everyone for your feedback. I'm closing this issue - the final copy is in the md file.

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