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Kimetsu no Yaiba Ep 24 subtitle errata based on latest commit d383c20, introduced in commit 4b0cfb6.
Compared against external subtitle file from older commit 2487c34.

02:31 - No text styling for episode title & presence of underscore symbol but both issues absent for Ep 25 in commit 4b0cfb6. Absence of episode title's new font in 'Ep 24 mkv file'?

16:32 - No auto line break. Aegisub settings changed (in other words, auto line break disabled) in subtitle file?

P.S. Only viewed Ep 24-26 in mpv player, so good to probe the cause of Ep 24 regression in case latest version for earlier episodes are affected as well.

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Dialogue: 10,0:01:45.54,0:01:51.04,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}He won’t be able to give you a ride if \Nyou’re tired since he can’t use the cart today.

Bit of word mince... Grammatically you need a comma, but could do with a shortening. It took me about 3 reads to understand it.

Dialogue: 10,0:06:46.30,0:06:48.05,Default,,0,0,0,,I’m cutting the lights.

Maybe a nitpick, but this felt off for the period.

Dialogue: 10,0:18:34.38,0:18:36.38,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Because for them, humans are nutritious.

Didn't read right to me. Maybe something more like "sustenance".

02

Dialogue: 10,0:15:43.67,0:15:50.26,Default,,0,0,0,,N-Now have I... p-passed the test?

Timing's real long. Could split it up, maybe even a few times, for effect.

To Be Continued sign

Probably a big ask, but it'd be cool to see some TS wizardry to get closer to the つづく.

03

Dialogue: 10,0:02:30.00,0:02:32.42,Default,,0,0,0,,Their staple food are humans.

"is" humans.

04

Dialogue: 10,0:17:38.99,0:17:41.87,Default,,0,0,0,,It’s like Urodaki fed them to me!

Urokodaki.

Dialogue: 10,0:18:39.76,0:18:42.72,Default,,0,0,0,,Another of Urokodaki’s brats is gonna die.

I don't presume to be a TL, but I'm hearing 死んだ. I interpreted it as he thought he was dead, which is why he was so surprised when he dodged the attack.

05

Dialogue: 10,0:07:00.56,0:07:02.40,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}If I ended up dying,
Dialogue: 10,0:07:02.40,0:07:04.32,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}my soul would make it back there, too.

Tense felt a little off. I'm understanding it as "If I die, my soul will make it back there too."

Line 90: Do you want me save you?

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Do you want me to save you?