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• Text "...deploying a Zend Framework 2 based app to the cloudControl PaaS.". Shouldnt it be "...deploying a Zend Framework 2 based app ON the cloudControl PaaS."?
• Link to "the official ZendSkeletonApplication" on github opens in the same tab. Shouldnt this link open a new tab so we dont send people away?

Here: https://next.dotcloud.com/dev-center/add-on-documentation/sendgrid

Explain .cctrlignore and max image size

What do we do, what does the User need to do? More Information about other Languages like Python Ruby and Java

The example output from $ dcapp APP_NAME/DEP_NAME addon ssl.host still shows AWS ELB related output.

when new version is released

There are glitches in the SSL docs.

https://www.cloudcontrol.com/dev-center/Add-on%20Documentation/Deployment/SSL

• Why is it only for users with v. 5.4? Its too extensive to set it up with lower version? Or we just dont want to show for older versions?
• It would be a bit easier to read if the initial sentence ("To be able to run the app locally...) was split up a bit (perhaps putting the part starting with composer just before its corresponding code block)
• It states that I should put something in my config/autoload/local.php file...but I can only see that I have a config/autoload/local.php.dist file. I know it reads in the .dist file to copy it without the .dist extension but this only became clear after I opened this file...for me at least :)

Tried the command to create a user and running into the following error message : "Could not connect to API..."

Dons-MacBook-Air:~ donpinto$ cctrluser create
Username: donpinto
Email : [email protected]
Password:
Password (again):
Could not connect to API...

If you submit your account information(IBAN/BIC) in lowercase it will return an error.

• In previous examples we show code as well as path to files but here there is only a reference to the "IndexController". We dont want to show the code/path for this?
• Maybe a rephrase of "After the short walkthrough of the code..." could make sense. I read this that we will still do more walk through of code. So, how about "Now that we have walked through some of the code in the example app, lets..." (also "walkthrough" has been written as 2 words previously in this tut)

• Spelling error here: "is used to cread the "...assume it should be "read"

• Link to MySQLs add-on opens in the same tab, should we not have this open in a new tab instead so we dont "send them away"?
• The text should also maybe read something like "We are going to use the free plan of the MySQLs Add-on which is very suitable for testing and development" instead of "We are going to use the MySQLs Add-on. It's a free shared database for testing and development." Es is nicht immer frei Junge!

Currently on:
https://staging-www3.cloudcontrolapp.com/dev-center/Guides/Java/AWS%20S3

Points

1. A add a little more explanation in the beginning towards WHY we do this guide. Perhaps something like "This guide will walk you through how to access and use Amazon S3 on cloudControl"
2. The links to the Java SDKs should open in a new tab
3. Suggested re-ordering (Under "Getting started")
   Start with "Follow the Amazon Guide...."
   Continue with "To use the official Amazon S3..."
   End with "The recommended way to make your credentials accessible to your application is to provide them via environment variables using the cloudControl Config Add-on [link to conf. add-on]" followed by codesnippet to show to do this"
4. If above makes sense then the "Example usage" section would start with "Now try out some..." or maybe we could say "Lets try out some operations on buckets and objects:"

See: https://www.cloudcontrol.com/dev-center/platform-documentation
The Link to the latest Windows installer is still redirecting to the old url.

In line 171 the guide prompts the user to find a specific line in the file 'application/bootstrap.php' and replace it, but this line does not actually matches the source code provided at the start of the tutorial, and thus this causes problems later with connecting to the database.

The text..."Let's clone the example code from Github and walk through some of the changes.". Shouldnt it be "...some of the code"?

Found a broken link at
https://www.cloudcontrol.com/dev-center/platform-documentation#scheduled-jobs-and-background-workers
Section workers ---> Link on "Worker add-on"

All Windows Installer Links in the documentation should point to https://www.cloudcontrol.com/download/win after the new version of the site has been released.

One just pushes the local branch, no path there

The PHP example code for mongolabs says you just select

$db = $m->selectDB(myDbName);

But myDbName actually has to be the name defined in the mongo uri. Is there some way to get this db name except

preg_match("#/([^/\?]+)(\?|$)#", $uri, $match);
database = $match[1];

?

• In previous examples we show code as well as path to files but here there is only a reference to the "IndexController". We dont want to show the code/path for this?
• Maybe a rephrase of "After the short walkthrough of the code..." could make sense. I read this that we will still do more walkthrough of code. So, how about "Now that we have walked through some of the code in the example app, lets..." (also previously in this tut walkthough is not written as 1 word...so "walk though" it shall be.

• Regarding "APP_NAME". Maybe good to write it out the first time, so "Make sure to pick a unique and exciting name for your application (APP_NAME).
• First time I pushed I got:
  <--
  remote: The 'https://api.github.com/repos/zendframework/zf2/zipball/release-2.2.1' URL could not be accessed: HTTP/1.1 403 Forbidden
  -->
  Second time it went through though...