https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/characters/kaladin.md

OLD

Kaladin, nicknamed Kal, renowned as Kaladin Stormblessed, is a darkeyed Windrunner of the Knights Radiant from #Alethkar. Despite being trained as a surgeon from an early age by his father, his chosen profession is that of a soldier. He is famed as the captain of Highprince #Dalinar Kholin's personal guard, a unit known as Bridge Four, and commander of the bridgemen battalion.

NEW

Kaladin, nicknamed Kal, renowned as Kaladin Stormblessed, is a darkeyed Windrunner of the Knights Radiant from #Alethkar. He is the son of Lirin and Hesina, brother of the deceased Tien, and little Oroden. Despite being trained as a surgeon from an early age by his father, his chosen profession is that of a soldier. He is famed as the captain of HighKing of Urithiru #Dalinar Kholin's personal guard, a unit known as Bridge Four, and commander of the bridgemen battalion.

DOUBT: Is his last rank prior to RoW Captain of Dalinar's personal guard?

Odd thing... Opened up the app on my phone, cleared cookie, refreshed, and the "Shattered Plains" text shows up in the wrong spot. (down and to the left rather than above)

I don't see a way to add locations to the Shadesmar map? We can probably get away without this for now, but at some point we'll want these.

Hi! I made some minor changes:

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/blob/master/translations/en/characters/dalinar.md

Original:

Dalinar Kholin is an Alethi highprince of #Alethkar. He is known as the Blackthorn for his military prowess and is the Highprince of War. He is the younger brother of the late King Gavilar, uncle of King #Elhokar Kholin and #Jasnah Kholin, and is currently married to Brightness #Navani Kholin, Gavilar's widow. He has two sons, #Adolin Kholin and #Renarin Kholin. He is a member of the Order of Bondsmiths, bonded to the Stormfather, and is the de facto leader of the reformed Knights Radiant.

I used this modification for the Spanish translation:

Dalinar Kholin is the Highking of #Urithiru. He is known as the Blackthorn for his military prowess. He is the younger brother of the late King Gavilar, uncle of late King #Elhokar Kholin and #Jasnah Kholin, and is currently married to Brightness #Navani Kholin, Gavilar's widow. He has two sons, #Adolin Kholin and #Renarin Kholin. He is a member of the Order of Bondsmiths, bonded to the Stormfather, and is the de facto leader of the reformed Knights Radiant.

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/characters/shallan.md

OLD

Shallan Davar, also known as Veil or Radiant, is a lighteyed Lightweaver of the Knights Radiant from #Jah Keved. Shallan is an emerging scholar whose greatest achievement is the discovery of the legendary city #Urithiru. She is also renowned for her extraordinary talent of accurately reproducing even fleeting scenes with photographic accuracy.

NEW

Shallan Davar, also known as Veil or Radiant, is a lighteyed Lightweaver of the Knights Radiant from #Jah Keved, who also collaborates with the secret society known as the Ghostblood. She's the daughter of deceased Lin Davar, but her mother's name remains unknown. She has four brothers. The older one, Helaran, died fighting against #Kaladin although they never get to know each other. The remaining brothers are Balat, Wikim and Jushu. She is an emerging scholar whose greatest achievement is the discovery of the legendary city #Urithiru. She is also renowned for her extraordinary talent of accurately reproducing even fleeting scenes with photographic accuracy.

ADDED: Information about her father and mother, brothers. Mention to the Ghostblood.

The "credits" field doesn't show up under image file field in the editor (after adding a file) unless you click to another event and back.

Files have pretty similar descs:

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/blob/master/translations/en/events/jasnah-arrives.md

Attacked by Ghostbloods aboard Wind's Pleasure, Jasnah accidentally transported herseful fully into Shadesmar and found immediate return to the Physical Realm impossible. Months later, Jasnah was able to transition back somewhere in the Unclaimed Hills, where she was greeted by Wit. Jasnah carefully returned to the Shattered Plains only to find the Warcamps abandoned and the tower city of Urithiru rediscovered.

and

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/blob/master/translations/es-ES/events/jasnah-returns-from-shadesmar.md

"Attacked by Ghostbloods aboard Wind's Pleasure, Jasnah accidentally transported herseful fully into Shadesmar and found immediate return to the Physical Realm impossible. She made the most of her time there, visiting the highspren to learn more of Roshar's past. Months later, Jasnah was able to transition back somewhere in the Unclaimed Hills, where she was greeted by Wit."

I think we need to change the desc. Please update and let me know so I can update/remove file the Spanish files accordingly.

The only properties for tags in the editor is their ID and a category. Currently no way to edit the text that gets displayed in settings.

Perhaps unnecessary if #24 is addressed, but it would be nice to have a quick way to jump to the very start or very end.

I'm sure a lot of people will open it up the first time, poke around for a moment, and then want to scroll through the timeline from the beginning. Scrolling all the way over is a bit of a slog though.

This is pretty minor. Thought it was worth pointing out though. Image explains it best:

Haven't investigated enough to say if it only happens with certain locations, or if other things affect it. It happens for me on Firefox and Chrome.

When you pop out additional timelines they aren't clearly labeled, aside from when the Settings menu is open. (On mobile the settings menu takes up the full screen so this is even less ideal.) Maybe we need to label them on the right? Or have a popup label if you click or hover on the line itself? Something else?

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/blob/master/translations/en/characters/moash.md

Minor addition.

OLD
Moash, also known as Vyre, is an Alethi man on Roshar. Originally a bridgeman in Bridge Four, he becomes a soldier and bodyguard under #Kaladin; eventually, he betrays Bridge Four and switches sides to the #Diagram, then the Fused, serving them as a slave, warrior and assassin. He's the current holder of Jezrien's Honorblade.

NEW
Moash, also known as Vyre, is an Alethi man on Roshar. Originally a bridgeman in Bridge Four, he becomes a soldier and bodyguard under #Kaladin; eventually, he betrays Bridge Four and switches sides to the #Diagram, then the Fused, serving them as a slave, warrior and assassin, killing late King #Elhokar. He's the current holder of Jezrien's Honorblade.

ADDED: ", killing late King #Elhokar."

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/characters/renarin.md

OLD

Renarin Kholin

I am not the first hero’s son to be born without any talent for warfare. The others all got along. So shall I.

Renarin Kholin is a lighteyes of the #Alethi House Kholin on Roshar. He is the second son of Dalinar, and the younger brother of Adolin. This makes him the nephew to Gavilar and Navani and cousin to Elhokar and Jasnah. Since Dalinar's abdication, he is first in line to succeed Adolin as highprince of the Kholin princedom.

NEW

Renarin Kholin

I am not the first hero’s son to be born without any talent for warfare. The others all got along. So shall I.

Renarin Kholin is a lighteyes of the #Alethi House Kholin on Roshar. He is the second son of #Dalinar, and the younger brother of #Adolin. This makes him the nephew to #Gavilar and Navani and cousin to #Elhokar and #Jasnah until #Navani married Dalinar. He's the brother-in-law of #Shallan Davar. Since Dalinar's abdication, he is first in line to succeed Adolin as highprince of the Kholin princedom. He's member of the Knight Radiants as Truthwatcher, and bonded to the corrupted spren Glys.

ADDED: KN Order, mention to corrupted Glyss. Links to Dalinar, Adolin, Gavilar, Navani, Elhokar, and Jasnah. Relationship with Navani as step-mother. Relationship with Shallan as sister-in-law.

Hi!

Here is the list of names appearing on the different maps.

Roshar

• The Misted Mountains -> Montañas brumosas

Note: We are still pending to confirm if we will keep Marabethia or marabezia in Spanish. Once I get the confirmation I will let you know.

Shadesmar

• Expanse of the Densities ->Extensión de las densidades
• Expanse of Vibrance -> Extensión de la Intensidad* (note.: this has not been translated yet, but tentatively we keep Intensidad for now).
• Expanse of the Broken Sky ->Extensión del cielo roto
• Expanse of the Vapors ->Extensión de los vapores
• Nexus of Truth ->Nexo de la verdad
• Nexus of Transition ->Nexo de la transición
• Nexus of Imagination ->Nexo de la imaginación
• Sea of Regret ->Mar del pesar
• Sea of Souls -> Mar de las almas
• Sea of Lost Lights ->Mar de las luces perdidas
• Celebrant -> Celebrant (remains as is)

Locations related to the Sea of Lost Lights:

• Candlemore -> Villacandela
• Sea of Oracles -> Mar de los oráculos
• Salavashi Trench -> Fosa Salavashi
• Smolderbrand Channel -> Canal de Marcadiente
• Celebrant -> Celebrant (remain as is)
• Celebrant Channel -> Canal de Celebrant
• North Hallen Channel ->Canal de Hallen Norte
• South Hallen Channel ->Canal de Hallen Sur
• Emberdark Channel -> Canal de Acuaoscura
• Nor Channel -> Canal de Nor
• Emberdark -> Acuaoscura
• The Burning Gardens -> Los Jardines Ardientes
• Ravizadth -> Ravizadth (remain as is)
• The Glasswater Deep -> Profundidades de Aguacristalina
• The Luminous Shallows ->Los bajíos luminosos
• Thaylen Sea ->Mar de Thaylen
• Caretaker of Laughter ->Custodio de la Risa
• Salumon the Third Tower -> Salumon, la Tercera Torre

Silver Kingdoms -> Reinos Plateados

• Alethela -> Alezela

Oathgate Locations

• Thaylen City -> Ciudad Thaylen

Current State of the World

• Dalinar's Coalition of Monarchs -> Coalición de Monarcas de Dalinar
• Odium's Forces -> Fuerzas de Odium
• Neutral -> Neutral (remain as is)

I added the following links to the Spanish translation: Adolin, Renarin, and Shallan. Maybe to do same with the English version?

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/characters/jasnah.md

The OB map has them, though Otto's help would probably be good here I imagine.

Would it be possible to search & replace the following in the files under the events folder?

Metadata fields:

Ch. -> Cap.
& -> y
The Way of Kings -> El camino de los reyes
Word of Radiance -> Palabras radiantes
Oathbringer -> Juramentada

Thank you!!!!

I included a link to Shallan's file on Adolin's desc.

Maybe that could be also done for the English version.

Currently there's no indication as to what the different colors mean

Small thing... The "Related" header in the "more info" panel is kind of plain. Would be nice to spruce it up (bold?, underlined?, small caps?, bigger?) so it looks like more of a header.

Added location link to the file: https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/events/battle-of-narak-and-the-everstorm.md

The Alethi forces led by Dalinar Kholin arrived at #Narak on the final day of Renarin's cryptic countdown. A battle ensued as the stormform listener forces worked to summon the Everstorm. The Alethi proved victorious, but the Everstorm's arrival nearly wiped out all survivors.

Maybe it could been added on the English version as well.

Minor change.

Slighty changed the desc from "who works" to "who worked".

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/characters/lift.md

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/characters/elhokar.md

OLD:

Elhokar Kholin

Perhaps the liar here is me—lying to tell myself I could do this, that I could be a fraction of the man my father was.

Elhokar Kholin is the king of #Alethkar on Roshar, and the nephew of Dalinar.

NEW:

Elhokar Kholin

Perhaps the liar here is me—lying to tell myself I could do this, that I could be a fraction of the man my father was.

Elhokar Kholin was the king of #Alethkar on Roshar after his father. Son of late king #Gavilar Kholin and #Navani Kholin, he was also younger brother to #Jasnah Kholin. He was married to Aesudan Kholin, and they had a children named Gavinor. He was murdered by #Moash during the assault to the Royal Palace, before he finished to pronounce the First Ideal and become a Knight Radiant.

See this example:

Sometimes get this issue (mostly a mobile probablem in my experience but maybe an issue on some desktop resolutions?) Where the art in the info panel fills the whole screen height. Not a major issue, but I wonder if it will confuse people, not realizing they can scroll down?

Maybe it should automatically bscroll down so the title at least is in view, if that's doable? Or have a floating arrow button to focus on title?

I think it would be nice to see an event's date on the details panel.

Maybe underneath the event name in a lighter font?

Currently no way to offset or scale Character images, which means they aren't cropped/sized well when displayed as thumbnail.

(might have same issue with Misc images I'm guessing)

On mobile the event popup sometimes covers the location indicator. Not sure if there's a good solution besides "make the event blurb shorter" but obviously it's less than ideal currently.

I'd like to have some kind of way to jump to a date.

Maybe by clicking the date indicator. Maybe a button up next to Settings or elsewhere?

I imagine it would open up a pop-up that lets you enter/select a year, month, week, day. Latter 3 could default to 1 and be selected with dropdown. I guess year would default to 1167 or whatever year is currently selected? And would have to be entered manually?

Just a thought...

It's not easy to scroll from one end of the timeline to the other. Wonder if we need some kind of... scroll bar? Or a button that sends you to one end or the other? Or a way to pick a date to go to?

Might be good to remember the last date someone viewed when they visit and go there instead of the default?

Mainly an issue on mobile, because when I switch to another app and back the page reloads to the default event on me.

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/blob/master/translations/es-ES/events/jasnah-returns-from-shadesmar.md

review Jufwu's notes and changes over the file and translate accordingly before the final publication.

I don't think "Kaladin joins Bridge Four" makes the best starting event that the map jumps to on a fresh load.

I'd say our best option would either be to not select any event at all OR to start with Gavilar's assassination.

I added the metadata to the file: https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/blob/master/translations/en/events/ashyn-exodus.md

Metadata

Please let me know if you think that could be incorrect and I will remove it.

Thank you!!!

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/characters/navani.md

OLD:

Navani Kholin is a Brightlady of #Alethkar on Roshar. She is the widow of #Gavilar Kholin and the mother of Jasnah and #Elhokar Kholin. She was the sister-in-law to #Dalinar Kholin and aunt to Adolin and #Renarin Kholin until she was married to Dalinar. She is also a renowned scholar and artifabrian.

NEW:

Find the structure here and start building upon it.

Navani Kholin is a Brightlady of #Alethkar on Roshar. She is the widow of #Gavilar Kholin and the mother of #Jasnah and #Elhokar Kholin. She was the sister-in-law to #Dalinar Kholin and aunt to #Adolin and #Renarin Kholin until she was married to Dalinar. She is also a renowned scholar and artifabrian.

NOTES: Quote added, Included links to Jasnah and Adolin.

When you open something up in detailed view, all of the "Related" items are just crammed next to one another. I would like to see some kind of visual distinction made between them.

My first instinct was to say that each type should have a different shape or outline color.

Another option, which I think I like better, would be to simply group each set under different headings.

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/events/boots.md

Add links to Shallan and Kaladin

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/events/bridge-four-begins-training-squires.md

Added link to Alethkar

Details

After Kaladin returned from his mission in #Alethkar, he began to see to the development of the growing Windrunners. Several members of Bridge Four showed signs of being Kaladin's squires, and in the coming weeks most of the crew, as well as some newcomers, would also take the steps to become squires or full Windrunners.

In the Editor, when entering things in "related" field, it would be nice if everything could be sorted alphabetically.

Feels like the transparency could be turned up on events on the timeline that are hidden. I figure if someone hid them it was deliberate and so they should be more invisible than not.

This is mainly a note for myself... Need to give some thought to what colors we use for other tags besides Kaladin/Dalinar/Shallan.

Looks like prior to 11166 the year markers are placed directly on events? I'd prefer if they were spaced at regular(ish) intervals with the events showing up in between.

Given the events we have.... Seems ideal to have markers at:

• -20k
• -10k
• -5000
• -1000
• 1
• 1000
• 1120
• 1130
• 1140
• 1150
• 1160
• 1165

(then 1166 and everything as it currently is from there on)

https://coppermind.net/w/images/Sea_of_Lost_Lights.jpg

(others as well, maybe??)

Isaac's Ashyn Exodus image not displaying on the page.

So far, awesome work! :)

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/characters/eshonai.md

OLD:

Eshonai

Progress is learning to control your world. Put up walls to stop the storms, choose when to become a mate.

Eshonai is a listener Shardbearer who lives in #Narak on the #Shattered Plains of Roshar during the War of Reckoning. She was one of the first Parshendi to come in contact with #Gavilar Kholin's soldiers in the #Unclaimed Hills.

NEW:

Eshonai

Progress is learning to control your world. Put up walls to stop the storms, choose when to become a mate.

Eshonai is a listener Shardbearer who lived in #Narak on the #Shattered Plains of Roshar during the War of Reckoning. She was one of the first Parshendi to come in contact with #Gavilar Kholin's soldiers in the #Unclaimed Hills. During the Battle of Narak she fought #Adolin Kholin in her Stormform, who pushed her into a chasm, where she died drowning.

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/events/kaladin-begins-training.md

Short desc and details are exactly the same text.

I made some changes to the details in Spanish, so it has a bit more sense.

While living in Hearthsone, Kaladin starts training with his father since early childhood to become a surgeon, unaware of Lirin's expectations to send him to Kharbranth once he becomes of age.

In the Spanish version I added links to both Jasnah and Elhokar. Maybe we could do the same for the English version?

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/characters/gavilar.md

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/events/chasmfiend-hunt-disaster.md

Add links to Elhokar and Dalinar.

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/events/kaladin-leaves-alethkar.md

Kaladin revealed himself as a Radiant the the singers he travelled with and returned to Urithiru during a highstorm

https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/events/odium-appears-to-dalinar.md

Change details. Desc and details are exactly the same line.

Please let me know so I can update the file in Spanish accordingly.

For events which occur in the text of the books, I'd like to include a book/chapter reference to where that event happens. To do this, I've started adding a "chapter" field in the en.json file.

Let me know if you think there's a better way to go about this... I guess maybe there would be a smarter way to do it for alternate translations... A book number field and a chapter number field?