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this is great stuff Jonathan, thanks so much!

did i miss some comments on chapter 1 (not that i'm requesting them)

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@hjwp Jonathan commented on chapter 1 in a fork. The comment was, essentially, "I didn't have enough experience of your domain to understand some of the terms you use" mentioning order line specifically. I think the model diagram we want to build should answer that issue, and Jonathan has kindly offered to take a look at it when we've done it :)

this is just because I'm relatively junior

@jonathanmeier5 if you're reading the book then it's for you, and if we've not explained things to your satisfaction, that's valuable feedback. Your confusion is our fault, not yours.

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@hjwp yes, @bobthemighty summarized it accurately :)

@bobthemighty thanks, I really appreciate that. I wasn't sure if I was quite your target audience, but I'll keep that in mind going forward.

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have converted these to TODOS and notes in the sources, thanks SO MUCH Jonathan. really appreciate it.

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